Light and shade play a beautiful game of hide & seek,
In the courtyard of memory lanes a strange match is being played,
Your warmth lights up all my memories,
And your absence leads me to the darkest alleys.
The touch is missing but the magic continues,
The distance is unfathomable but the closeness continues,
The footsteps go untraceable but the marks remain.
very nice post. each line in itself is a memorable sequence of words.
ReplyDeleteGlad to follow your blog :)
The strength of a memory is usually in its passing!
ReplyDelete@Apoyando Thanks a lot for your kind words. Honoured :)
ReplyDelete@Anil True, I agree :)
Hey Liza
ReplyDeleteLovely! totally touched. The last two lines. OMG I love them. Great work.
Keep up the good work.
Cheers
Sanjay
@sanz4u on twitter
hopeless romantic! god bless!
ReplyDeleteVery touching! Some very strong emotional inspiration behind it!
ReplyDelete- Pinak
@Sanjay Thank you so much for the kind words :D
ReplyDelete@Anonymous Thank you :)
@Pinak Yup. Thank you :)
U know whats the best part about what you write..its neither the words, nor the sentences...you so miraculously combine the both that makes them touch the heart. It is because what you write is not just what u think..its because you feel it from deep inside, straight from your heart. You convey things perfectly.Its not just a collection of words, its a collection of real feelings..so pure and serene. soham
ReplyDelete@Soham Thank you so much. Means a lot coming from a good writer :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful tribute:) Nice sincere thoughts
ReplyDelete@Sajeevkmenon Thank you :)
ReplyDeletewatery eyes with widened lips... its touching masi...
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